Woven Reflections
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IDLE, HOLLOW, SHELL
Her constant whispers pound and beat.
How did I contract her disease?
She's a binding force, weaving herself into my mind, which won't relent until she's human. She is talking to me. She makes the rules, and enforces them too. The concept of her and myself is not clear. Is this shell a person, or a reflection of the disease?
idle.
Hollow.
Shell.
Her drive is void to compete with. It shoves me up the wall of insanity, but no one cares if I fall. She is talking.
Idle.
Hollow.
Shell is the goal. How to compete? As I ponder the decision is made. She is me.
it is okay i like your choice of words.
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